Friday, June 5, 2015

Redaction: Planet


The world is our planet and if we can live with conditions we will improve all the issues. I think that we don't respect it like it respects us.

First, I will talk about pollution, the pollution doesn't affect only the planet, this issue affect us too. That's why we need to do things better than we are doing.

Second overconsumption was terrible consequences for the planet, because all population throws stuff into the trash. This people don't do that because they want, they do because all things were produced in bad conditions. Because of this the people need to throw and but another only for money.

Third, the world wars kill thousands of people died only because of two governments that think different.

All these consequences teach  us that the planet isn't better than before. But we do things better too. For example the globalization and the technologies.

In my conclusion the globalization and the technologies. All this stuff think to me that we don't do the planet a better place.

Presentation: Kidnapping




NAME & TOPIC:
MARK
Presentation
        10%
Do you use any resources: powerpoint, video, images, sound, real material...?
Are the resources focused on the topic?
Do the resources support your oral explanation?
Is the timing 5- 10 minutes?
5
Body language & eye contact
        10%
Are  you looking at your audience most of the time?
Are you reading occasionally from your notes ?
Are you doing any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?
5
Structure
            10%
Do you organize your ideas in order of importance?
Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? (First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other, finally…)
10
Content
        40%
Do you introduce new information to your audience?
Is your information  detailed, clear and...?
Do you give/show examples?
30
Language
       20%
Is your grammar correct, complex? (verbs, word order, tenses learnt in class)
Is your vocabulary rich, varied (synonyms, idioms, expressions, phasal verbs, topic-related)
Do you use sentence linkers? (and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although, however…)
Do you use fillers? (well, you know, for example, one second, repeating a word…)
10
Pronunciation & Intonation
        10%
Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation?
Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Do you speak in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
5
Self-Evaluation
You are your teacher! :-)                                 FINAL MARK:
6,5

I think that the presentation was good but we need to prepare more to talk better than we did. In my opinion we choose a good topic but we can do better. In summary we need to do the presentation before.


Saturday, May 23, 2015

How you make a cage for parrots?

Now I will explain the instructions to do a cage for parrots:



Material:

-Wood sticks.
-Mesh rolls.
-Nails.
-Hammer
-Saw


Procedure:

1.- We draw a picture to know where we put the cage and what we put it.

2.- We need to put concrete in the underground surrounding the cage because there  will be rats and this is to prevent that the rats kill the parrots.

3.-After we begin to build the structure with the wooden sticks.

4.-We cut the a pieces of mesh to put in the structure.

5.-We pin the pieces of mesh with nails.

6.- We can chose to put a roof with wood.

7.- Finally we do a double door to enter without being able to escape any parrot.

Mononucleosi infectious


I will explain an infection that I have just pass. This infection is the Mononucleosi, this infection also is know as the kiss infection. It transferable by saliva. It's the lowest  infection of the blood because it only do that you will be more tired. Depend on the person it affect more o minus, in my case it affect very little because if it would be for me I had already played. But in other case for example my brother two years ago he affect it more than me because he didn't do sport and nothing, I didn't stay wrong, but I stay crushed. Fortunately this last Friday I  went to the doctor and he register me. He said that I can already did normal life with competitions.


Aratinga red Head


Aratinga red head called aratinga wagleri is a type of parrot who had very green and red colours. Her peak had clear colour than the other parrots and is very sharpening. It is a parrot of 20 cm of size. Sometimes scream and do very loud but is a good parrot to have because is very loving.
I like this parrot because I have one who were grow up with me and my father. She can speak and say words. Is a territorial parrot because I have another type of parrot that the aratinga remove her husband for this the other parrrots don't raise. I would buy another but it's so expensive.

Girona don't pass at first division direct.


Unfortunately today Girona F.C. don't pass at first division direct because Lugo tie in the 91 minute. After in 94 minute Girona F.C. make a goal but the referee linesman cancel it for offside. The Girona hobby throws bottles to the referee linesman and the referee suspend the game and run inside the dressing because the hobby of Girona want to hurt them. After a long time, the referee rebukes the game and the Girona F.C. can play the last ninety seconds. When the game has finish all the Girona F.C. players are very sad and they cry.

I think that the problem proceed at the beginning second part because they didn't play better than Lugo so I already think that Lugo have been done a goal. Despite the fact I want to win Girona F.C.

My research project


Today I will talk about my research project. It consist in the applications of the oil reused. In that project I explain the history of the vegetal oil, types of oils, the applications and more things. My tutor is Lluisa, my chemist teacher. We center the project in the chemist part of the oil. If I have chosen another project, probably now I be would doing the technological project about the car engines. But I prefer to do this because I have a lot of information because my mother work about this and more things about recycling. Also my tutor help to me a lot with all things, she always ask to me and say to me many things to improve my project so I'm really happy to have chosen this project. I hope we can make biodiesel and soaps for the toilets.