Friday, January 31, 2014

Correct CCBB Writings


Writing 1

Hi  auntie,
How are you? Ihope you're well. I'm writing to tell you about my new friend.
She's called Júlia. She's 15 like me! She is from Wales. She has blue eyes, blonde hair, she's thin and she's very beautiful. She likes riding a horse and playing computer games. She hates the spiders. She has a grey and white horse. Sometimes I see her in the horse camp.

Lots of love, Pere/Anna.

Writing 2

Last weekend I stayed at home, then played a basketball game. When my team and I finished the game, we went to the cinema and we saw Pirates of Caribean. On Sunday my family and I flew the radiocontrol planes, helicopter and cars. We felt fine and happy, during we went to fly the radiocontrol planes, ... my grandparents went to Canada to see my aunt.

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